War Horse Review

Part 1

Once upon of time in England born a baby foal. Then there’s a boy who’s approach to the foal to gave an apple but the foal was rejected because the foal called by hi/ her mother. In the city there’s a auction that selling a horse. In the action the foal has separated to his mother and then going to the auction. Then Ted narracott see the horse and bet the horse, then Lyons who is the rich guy in the town bet and Ted narracott bet again with the final result 30 guinea. When Ted narracott went home his wife Rosie naracott saw that he buy a horse and Rosie naracott angry to Ted. Then Albert naracott there son sees the horse and trained the horse. Albert named the horse ‘Joey’. When the Lyon’s come to Ted naracott house, Ted has debt to Lyon’s because he pay only 15 guinea. Then after a little conversation, Ted naracott tries to give a harvest to Joey but Joey rejected then Ted tries to killed Joey but Albert and Rosie defend Joey.  When Albert tries to put  a harvest in Joey neck, Joey accepted the harvest and Albert start to harvest the farm, but Joey wasn’t moving because it’s flat ground. When it’s raining Albert star to whip Joey. After harvesting and plant the turnip, a soldier with a motorcycle and say “The war was coming!” Then there’s a big rain then destroy the turnip. Then some guy come to town and says there’s a war then Ted tries to sell Joey with 35 guinea but Cpt. Nickels refused the offered, he want 20 guinea and then Ted make a new offered with 30 guinea. Then Albie tries to run to the city but it’s to late. When back in the camp Cpt. Nickels and Major Jamie Stewart tries to train with the horse. Then Joey meet’s Topthorn and they become a couple. When in the war all the man was dead in the cavalry because they just ambushed by the machine gun. Cpt. Nickels died in action. Major Jamie Stewart and Charlie has been captured to the German based camp. Then Gunther and Michael take cares of Joey and topthorn. In the middle of the night Gunther has a job to take care the horse. But Michael he just 14 must participating the war. So Gunther had a plan to take Michael from the war, so Gunther take Joey and Topthorn and chased Michael then they went to the windmill to hide. In the morning Gunther and Michael is found by the General and killed because of betray.

Part 2

            In the morning young girl named Emilie found a 2 horse in her windmill. Then she hide the 2 horse because she want to make surprised for her grandpier. Then Emilie trained Joey how to jump but Joey don’t want to jump. So then her grandpier give her a saddle, then Emilie tries to walk with the horse to the top of the hill. Then Grandpier and topthorn was worried of Emilie and Joey because she didn’t returned. Topthorn and granpere was going to the top of the hill then he see that Emilie was trapped to the German arm. Then the German took Joey and Topthorn to lift up the artillery. Then there’s guy name Heiglemann to take cares Joey and Topthorn. When many horse lift up the artillery there’s a horse was tired then the General shot the horse then the General pick Topthorn but Joey tries to resist it then Joey tries to become an volunteer. After a long walk Topthorn tries to sit down then  Heiglemann tries to said” Don't sit down pliss I beg you pliss!” Then all German was retried and Heiglemann tries to walk away from the soldier to take care Joey but he forced by the soldier. Then Joey tries to run from the tank  then jump to tank then he straight goes to the no man land and he trapped by the wired. In the morning The British and German tries to whistle and called by the 2 nation and one in the British named Collin tries to surrender for the horse then the German tries to helped Collin from the bad wired. So the German tries to give them a wired cutter and cut the bad wired from the head to the body. After the cut the wired Collin try to negotiation to Peter the German soldier. They play coin tossed, Collin wins. In the trench Collins tries to help Joey to the medic area. Then Collin says” Sir, I need your help for this horse.” Then the General was rejected because there’s no vet in around in the trench. So he called the soldier tries to kill Joey but Albie tries to called joey then Joey tries to look.   Then after Joey and Albie met the general is forced him to go but Albie tries to described the Joey. The next day the war has ended in 11 September and the General says that Joey must be in auction because he’s not the officer horse. Then every men is supported Albie to take back Joey.  

Reflection Argumentative & Debate

So in this topic I learned 2 topics and it was fun. In the first topic I learned about the argumentative essay. I learned about:

1. Topic sentences

2. Format

3. Counter argument

4. Thesis Statement

5. Intro – Background

6. Reason

7. APA Style

So I learned about the argumentative essay from making the topic about the child who killed 7 people. Then I learned about the placed of the thesis statement and the format to write the argumentative essay. Then I got a assignment that is make the argumentative essay by own thesis statement. My thesis statement is” Selling gun in USA should be ban because to make a less crime and terrorism” Then I make the essay with the format Con’s, Con’s, Pro’s. My essay is bad because I didn’t put the thesis statement in the bottom of the introduction then my body paragraph is wrong. What did I do well? I did not much things in argumentative essay. I followed the format then I know how to make the good thesis statement. What do I need to work on? I need many improved to make a good argumentative essay like the body paragraph, I think I need to proof read’s the argumentative essay and make a good Body paragraph, then I need to improved my skill in making the APA style, then I need to make a good introduction because in my essay I didn’t put the thesis statement below.

In the Second topic I learned about the debate. I just learned the debate in grade 8. As you can see in debate I didn’t trust my gut’s to speak my  idea to debate it. Then in this classed I learned many thing to debate the write a good idea and speak more confidence. What did I do well? So I did many thing in debate. I got the good idea of the globalization then I know about the affirmative and the opposition. What do I need to work on? So I need to work on the rebuttal and I need to be confidence to talk my idea and I need to speak more about the debate.